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A Lost Cause by ~foxyadder:iconfoxyadder:



A Lost Cause

I remember a time
When I was on your mind
Instead of her.
I remember when
We would meet, secretly,
Under the cover of night.
But now my world
Is torn apart.

Tell me that it isn't true,
That it was only a mistake.
You've stolen my heart
And you won't give it back.
I know I can't ever get over
What I lost that night.
You gave me up,
And went with her instead.

Have you forgotten it all?
What we shared
And felt back then.
Was it all just playtime to you?
Do you even remember
What we had once?
Do you think we could get it back,
Or is it just a lost cause?
©2008 ~foxyadder
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I wrote some of this poem on the front of my English binder today. xD It's another Warriors-inspired poem: it's Leafpool talking to Crowfeather. She's remembering when they were in love and were willing to give up everything for each other, and now she's horrified to find that Crowfeather has gone off with Nightcloud.

Warriors (c) Erin Hunter

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~9tailedwolf:icon9tailedwolf: Apr 30, 2008, 7:20:15 PM
aww :cries: *SNIFF*

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I'm a nerd and I'm proud

"things are shaping up to be pretty odd"


Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.
~paz63:iconpaz63: Apr 30, 2008, 7:23:47 PM
goodness ama! why the heck do you steal my line! I WAS GOING TO SAY THAT! :chainsaw:

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why do you care what i think?
~9tailedwolf:icon9tailedwolf: Apr 30, 2008, 7:25:58 PM
hehehe in your FACE SUCKER :evillaugh:

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I'm a nerd and I'm proud

"things are shaping up to be pretty odd"


Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.
~foxyadder:iconfoxyadder: Apr 30, 2008, 7:26:05 PM
:hug: I make Ama cry? D;

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Adder loves spuds, mangos, and PAPAYA THE SAILOR!!

  /l、
(゚、 。 7
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ
My little warrior kitty! =3
~foxyadder:iconfoxyadder: Apr 30, 2008, 7:26:15 PM
xDD

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Adder loves spuds, mangos, and PAPAYA THE SAILOR!!

  /l、
(゚、 。 7
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ
My little warrior kitty! =3
~paz63:iconpaz63: Apr 30, 2008, 7:38:29 PM
i stab you :fork:

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why do you care what i think?
~9tailedwolf:icon9tailedwolf: Apr 30, 2008, 7:40:22 PM
that was a cardboard cut out of me (ryan helped me make it)

the real me comes out and....:hug:

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I'm a nerd and I'm proud

"things are shaping up to be pretty odd"


Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.